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Haiku #2-5

The soft fingertipLift of a girl's chin towardsHer sweetheart's felt lips,Against a moonlitSky, can be so magical,So enlightening,When retold withinReceptacles of the drumThat beats its echoesIn tune...

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and these as well.keep it rollin... CHEERS!!!loved the beginning,"The soft fingertipLift of a girl's chin towardsHer sweetheart's felt lips"wow!

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Keep on writing you have got telentjan oskar hansen

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Thank you lullibeyes and oskarthethird for your kind words. My confidence level in my writing is slowly, but surely building. Appreciate all your support. Loving it - AWZ smiles of warmth...

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awwwwwwzzzzz how come you never showed me this? I LOVE IT!!! YOU and OUR "spooning" hollidays... -your boo

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AWZ-you should consider entering this in the "Stretch your quill" haiku contest...as well as your "Haiku #1".So howsaboutit? c'mon.....stop being so modest.... -Lul

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Wonderful haiku! -enjoyed reading these, especially the Billy Holliday Matt

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Their all good haikus. Well done!

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